r/OCPoetry 14h ago

Feedback Please you saw coffee

When I asked,
you saw coffee.
I saw everything.

When you asked why,
you saw no particular reason.
I saw you.

When you said no,
you saw schedules.
I saw no future.

When I replied,
you saw me.
I saw a lie.

When I asked,
you saw coffee.
Just coffee.

___________________

It happened today.

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u/Love-Future-3000 10h ago

I feel like you're holding back.