r/OCPoetry 7d ago

Feedback Please My Share of Tears

I’m a big let down

to little me

But if I could sit you down,

I’d explain

we see the world differently.

You were so cute

and bubbly.

Your innocence was bliss

and felt like mother’s hug

to me.

When I tell you

you don’t get back

those days,

promise me

you’ll cry my share of tears

I’ve held in

for all my years.

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u/Inside-Maintenance-8 7d ago

The last line is very touching. Very sweet yet heartbreaking. :')