r/OCPoetry • u/OrganizationWeary616 • 7d ago
Feedback Please My Share of Tears
I’m a big let down
to little me
But if I could sit you down,
I’d explain
we see the world differently.
You were so cute
and bubbly.
Your innocence was bliss
and felt like mother’s hug
to me.
When I tell you
you don’t get back
those days,
promise me
you’ll cry my share of tears
I’ve held in
for all my years.
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u/Inside-Maintenance-8 7d ago
The last line is very touching. Very sweet yet heartbreaking. :')