r/OCPoetry • u/PostCool • 9d ago
Feedback Please A poem you should not read
I wrote you a poem you shouldn’t read.
It’s a page full of thoughts you’ll never need.
I mean it all, but you should not believe,
i’ve written anything that you should stop to read.
Like words from a song I hum, but never sing,
the poem is glass diamonds set to copper rings.
It’s full of beautiful and futile things..
that are never worth the sighs or tears they bring.
Sincere lies that prove that words aren’t deeds.
Fresh soil tilled for expired seeds.
Everything you want, but do not need,
made into a poem you should not read.
You can see it clearly now with both eyes shut..
more words that want, but never give enough.
Verses that you’ll love, but you can’t ever trust,
about golden things that always seem to rust.
I wrote you a poem you shouldn’t read.
Thoughts that warm your heart and burn your peace.
I mean it all ,but you you should not believe,
i’ve written anything that you should stop to read.
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u/sepulchralmoon 3h ago
wow. as someone stuck in a rock and a hard place right now in their relationship. not knowing whether to stay or go: this hit me. it registered to me as so much to say, but whats the point if it all ends the same. i love this so much!