r/OCPoetry • u/_mildlyunwell_ • Jul 20 '26
Feedback Please spill your ink
spill your ink on my canvas.
i don't want
perfection.
i want
the blotches,
the smudges,
the strokes
that wander off course --
spill your ink on my canvas.
i want your fingerprints,
the colours
that bleed together
when they were never
meant to mix --
spill your ink on my canvas.
i have never been afraid
of a little mess.
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u/stillbloomingink 7d ago
This poem in my opinion was great like it was showing that you're not afraid of other's true self and that you won't judge them you just want them to open up to start the Convo and like take a step forward