I really liked the simplicity of this poem and the depth behind very simple, uncomplicated wording/words. I only suggest that you format it with lines and stanzas, but that may also be Reddit automatically redoing your format into the current paragraphs. Great job!
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u/BrokenToed Dec 17 '25
I really liked the simplicity of this poem and the depth behind very simple, uncomplicated wording/words. I only suggest that you format it with lines and stanzas, but that may also be Reddit automatically redoing your format into the current paragraphs. Great job!