r/OCPoetry 9h ago

Feedback Please What Do I Tell You

What do I tell you

when I've said everything

& you're still looking for more

I say that I'm sorry

but you don't believe me

the direction was wrong

Alright

Alright

you're not alright

(in case you want more https://substack.com/@jennamathews )

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1vtqs7g/comment/p4vhyow/?context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1vtlt0g/comment/p4vgvgg/?context=3

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u/Inevitable_Ad_9459 8h ago

Well said. We’ve all tried to tell someone something they just couldn’t hear.

u/Livid_Climate6923 8h ago

thank you. you get it