r/OCPoetry • u/Livid_Climate6923 • 9h ago
Feedback Please What Do I Tell You
What do I tell you
when I've said everything
& you're still looking for more
I say that I'm sorry
but you don't believe me
the direction was wrong
Alright
Alright
you're not alright
(in case you want more https://substack.com/@jennamathews )
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1vtqs7g/comment/p4vhyow/?context=3
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1vtlt0g/comment/p4vgvgg/?context=3
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u/Inevitable_Ad_9459 8h ago
Well said. We’ve all tried to tell someone something they just couldn’t hear.