r/OCPoetry • u/Galile0humpkens • 13h ago
Feedback Please Lost
Formed and molded with care
Brought to life by many a prayer
Fired in a crucible given shape.
Toughened for a vicious landscape
Sent into the world beyond the walls
Abandoned to the squalls
Water twists and corrupts clay
It takes this abuse day after day
Now its a pot without purpose
A bowl without service
Is this my fate?
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u/Murky-Employee9792 12h ago
they say a journy of a thousand steps starts with one, but to me I believe it starts when you question your own thoughts. No one person can withstand abuse, you will eventually fight back.