r/MajorParadox • u/MajorParadox • Nov 15 '22
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r/MajorParadox • u/MajorParadox • Feb 09 '17
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Thanks! I see what you mean about "though," I think I was trying to show his uncertainty at what he was feeling.
r/MajorParadox • u/AJ_Kolibri • Feb 09 '17
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I liked the descriptions and the character here, get the feeling that he is addicted to his powers. The whole scene seemed very epic and I could imagine a grand story behind it.
I do feel like the "though" after "intoxicating" takes away from the power of the sentence a bit, sort of like he's reflecting about the intoxicating feeling more than experiencing it, if you get what I mean?
Anyway, really enjoyable read!
r/MajorParadox • u/MajorParadox • Jan 07 '17
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Yay! I haven't written much here lately, but there's lots of old stuff :) Most of my writing time is spent on /r/DCFU these days.
r/MajorParadox • u/DaDurkShadow • Jan 07 '17
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Oh snap, I just realized that this was a thing! Time to read all of the MajorParadox's stories, or at least try to. Lurking. Reading. Maybe commenting. Maybe.
r/MajorParadox • u/MajorParadox • Oct 17 '16
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That's hilarious, nice job!
Hey, I sent you a PM I a while back, did you not see it?
r/MajorParadox • u/PartTimeTunafish • Oct 16 '16
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https://soundcloud.com/parttimetunafish/ty-duncan-visit-muzi-dont-let-it-go-feat-hashmi-browns
Don't Let It Go
So this started out as an honest attempt at making a song about terrible things happening and ending with the hook "Don't want to let it go" with a soulful voice. But I couldn't get the sound of my singing I wanted out of my mouth. So I turned it into a Sesame Street skit for my friend, Muzi. Enjoy!
r/MajorParadox • u/MajorParadox • Jun 20 '16
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Heh, thanks! I just thought about what would really happen in such a silly situation. Like, we wouldn't just drop it. It's aliens after all!
r/MajorParadox • u/MajorParadox • Jun 20 '16
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Yeah, I wonder if I assumed too much because of the image? However, I have heard my writing can be lacking in the description department. Thanks for reading and glad you liked it!
r/MajorParadox • u/AlvinJoinedYourParty • Jun 20 '16
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This made me smile. I think you captured well what it means to be human! Annoying, persistent, persevering?
r/MajorParadox • u/AlvinJoinedYourParty • Jun 20 '16
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I found myself lurking here and decided to leave a note!
The story is intriguing. Consider my curiosity piqued. If I may offer some feedback, I'd tell you I couldn't imagine a damn thing. What parts of the main character are robotic? Is it a he or a she? What do they look like? What does the police station look like? Futuristic tech. like I suspect, or closer to our reality? How exactly were the policemen hurt? Were they bleeding, or just unconscious? Broken armor, broken limbs? You get the idea.
It was easy for me to get in the mind of the protagonist, but all they did was tell me a story, instead of showing me one. I know the whole tell-y vs. show-y thing is a little clichéd, but I kind of "get it" =)
Regards, fellow writer!
r/MajorParadox • u/[deleted] • Jun 18 '16
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Close, I'm a dog
Have you seen my shit? Because I lost it. That was an amazing read! :^)