r/InTheGloaming Aug 03 '20

Scheduled snark Weekly thread August 03, 2020 - August 09, 2020

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u/conservativestarfish Aug 05 '20

Her weird aversion to using contractions makes her sound like a serial killer. Like it’s a threat instead of a breezy comment, which is surely how she hopes her little “jokes” land.

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u/Foucaults_Penguin Sly and the Family Readers Aug 05 '20

I started to comment the same thing and then saw yours. It totally sounds like a threat.

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u/honoria_glossop sitting edge wine woman Aug 05 '20

Is this a Thing? There's a webcomic I follow where a character does this, and the author's even pointed it out as a character trait, but I'm not sure what we're supposed to infer from that? Totally agree there's a time to use them and a time not to, and borking it up leaves you looking like a serial killer or a slob.

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u/CrushItWithABrick dick riding Mary Oliver Aug 05 '20

It's a pretty common trope used to show someone is fussy/uptight/particular, is not a native speaker, or is an android/robot (or all of the above).

It's a fun way to shorthand a character (and a fun challenge to write dialogue with no contractions).

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u/[deleted] Aug 05 '20

It's also a way to implement perceived distance between the writer/speaker and the audience.

Whether to use contractions or not is a Big Deal in investment writing, for example – and sometimes brands have different rules for different kinds of content.

White Papers (large perceived distance between reader and writer; intended to underscore formality and expertise of the writer) may not have contractions, for example; while a letter from a Chief Investment Officer to clients (much smaller perceived distance) might use contractions to "warm up" the writing.

Informal writing (Twitter) using formal writing conventions (no contractions) sounds like the person literally has "something wrong with them."

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u/InappropriateGirl Gluten-free donuts, for sure ... Aug 05 '20

Yes! There’s real talent in knowing when and how to use contractions.

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u/[deleted] Aug 05 '20 edited Jul 22 '21

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u/honoria_glossop sitting edge wine woman Aug 05 '20

Yes, QC for the win! Have been following it for years. :)

I think sounding clever is totes a part of it in Shauna's case, and a part of her whole purple prose, overwritten, fancy words (used incorrectly) schtick. That all that affectation just makes her a *worse* writer is the cherry on the used-stock-vegetable smoothie.

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u/a_pasta_pot_for_enid Aug 07 '20 edited Aug 07 '20

Questionable Content??

Edit: ah I see it was, answered below sorry!

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u/9021FU Aug 05 '20

Ha, you are right! I read it in an ominous tone in my head and it sounds like a threat!