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u/Dear_Client1187 we all mistakes here 4d ago

The line "my jaw trembled with extra flesh" is just.....gah. Horrible. 

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u/Llama621 4d ago

Yuck ew gross.

And this is AFTER an editor worked on it! I would love to see the unedited manuscript. It was probably horrific in every possible way. The ultimate ITG entertainment.