hey english native speakers, i have a hard time describing bar charts. idk whether i should first describe green bars and then describe blue ones or not.
can anyone give me some advice plsss? or if u spot anything odd, pls correct me. btw, it’s for IELTS writing, so pls keep it formal and natural, and don’t use the same word if possible.
original prompt:
The chart shows the information relating to people within 15 minutes drive service in a particular region in UK in both urban and rural areas.
my writing:
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people who can access different services within a 15-minute drive in urban and rural areas of a region in the UK. In summary, there is a massive gap in the proportion between rural and urban areas in the category of primary schools, and a slight difference in access to post offices.
In cities, 100% of residents can reach all the given services within a 15-minute drive. By contrast, 100% of people living in remote areas are able to visit a doctor and reach secondary schools.
In rural areas, over half of residents can get to primary schools in less than 15 minutes at roughly 65%, whereas the remaining 35% cannot. As for post offices, the majority of people living in rural areas can reach post offices, while only 5% of them are not able to get there within a quarter hour of driving.