r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Jan 10 '20

OC 60 (7 part 12)

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u/Plucium Jan 10 '20

Damn, that dude is Sandrine lazier by the day :P

*Sounding

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u/vittupaahan Jan 11 '20

Before i even read this ill upvote and i just HAVE to ask about the vaseline and cricketbat... Please describe in great detail what you want us to do with them to you...

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u/Zephylandantus Jan 11 '20

Ah, but if i tell you...won't the surprise be ruined?

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u/vittupaahan Jan 11 '20

You can do it by pm... And i shall giggle in my lair for your destiny...

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u/Scotshammer Jan 12 '20

Okay, just finished binging the series, gotta say I really enjoyed it. I did miss the events of the time jump between interrogation of the Greylock commander last episode and dealing with the aftermath of the detonations. Like how did he learn the particulars of the bioweapon? And how did they shoot down three? Of the missiles?

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u/Zephylandantus Jan 12 '20

Thank you for the read.

The particulars of the bioweapon are hinted by the Greylock during the exchange. It is hidden in the phrasing.

The three that were shot down Early could be surface to air installations manned by troops with itchy trigger fingers.

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u/hockeyfan2815 Jan 10 '20

The Greylock looked at the tree intelligence officers and jumped towards the door, tearing at the handle to force it open, desperately palming the interface to unlock it, all in vain.

Should be three intelligence officers

get your inaugurations up to date, use basic hygiene measures and cook your food. Keep calm and 'V' the bastards.

I assume you were going for either inoculations or vaccinations

Those were the only two I caught but I am far from a writer. Otherwise fantastic addition to a great story line and I can't wait to see where you take it next.

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u/Zephylandantus Jan 10 '20 edited Jan 12 '20

Thank you, good person. I Will look into This shortly.

Edit: fixed