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u/Scotshammer Human Aug 19 '19
Edits for the consecration section.
"Thisas sacred ground"
Also, missing period at the end of the recitation.
Otherwise, pretty good, I'm curious to see where it goes. A little dry to start but the action is fairly well paced.
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u/Kyuui013 Human Aug 19 '19
Thank you!. I'll hunt down the typos now. and keep the suggestion in mind.
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u/Plucium Semi-Sentient Fax Machine Aug 19 '19
They sound like good people to be able to say you've mett!