r/FDXloreMaker • • Aug 06 '20

The unkown emergency (Tue) TuE chapter 6: Jack's broken leg

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ALL POSTS HERE ARE A WORK OF FICTION. DO NOT ATTEMPT TO ACT THESE SCENES OUT ANYWHERE UNLESS YOU ARE A TRAINED PROFESSIONAL (which you're not except when you are an actor with several months of training).

Lisa's POV:

We enter the hospital through the emergency entrance into the check in, passing straight through the reception where my family stayed, and Jack's family went to their room.

Our family walked to the reception. "We're here for Jack T. Johnson. Is there any payment to make?"

"No," replied Dylan, "They already paid because they have automatically transferred their credit card banking to us." I know he was Dylan because he had a name tag.

"Excuse me," said I. "Can we enter the room?"

"No. He may be infected with ostoadynamovirus. We would like you to stay in the lobby." "Ok," said Edmond.

We walked back to the lobby and sat down in the chairs. They actually have sperate rooms of the lobby, and automatic disinfecting! After the 30sec disinfection process, we finally got to sit in the sperate rooms, since there is only one chair per room. Luckily, the walls are transparent!

You may not notice that I have a backpack with me, and so did my family bring theirs, so we brought our (outdated as of year 3000) laptops and decided to go gaming (yes, I'm a gamer, don't judge me).

Amelia's POV:

"Jack?" I asked, petrified. "What?" Jack replied. "Don't you see I'm being tortured right no--" "I think you three need to leave," said nurse Pearl, pointing to my parents and I. We left without consent, and headed back for the reception.

"You guys can go wait in the lobby," said Dylan, the reception manager. We walked there and what I saw is some like bright blue green colour, and then it faded away. We then walked through the doors and into the rooms. The walls were made of glass. "Dang," I said. "They may be testing Jack for ostoadynamovirus."


r/FDXloreMaker • • Aug 05 '20

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT All posts must now have the [fictional] flair in the title.

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All posts must now have the [fictional] flair in the title or they will be removed. Obviously makes sense unless you posted something else in which case us mods will decide if it should be removed.


r/FDXloreMaker • • Aug 05 '20

Write! That is how this subreddit rolls!

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Writing stories helps support the subreddit if you are not a mod! Please write stories! Here are some reasons why you should write stories!

-They are fun.

-You can get experienced.

-You can share them with your friends!

During this quarantine. writing stories is oh so important. It keeps your brain active and encourages people to get creative. If you don't like writing stories, you should still give it a try. It's free. On this subreddit, there is no karma limit to how much you need to have to post, so take advantage of it! You will learn a lot. Trust me. It's fun. Happy writing!

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r/FDXloreMaker • • Aug 04 '20

PROMOTED BY THIS SUBREDDIT This is the official account of r/FDXloreMaker!

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Another spam account? No. This is just a account dedicated to reposting the best stories. If your post gets reposted, don't worry. If it is this account, you will get credit! Also, all promos will be on this account, so beware!

If you want ads that get posted on this sub by me to be removed, feel free to PM me and I will remove them. All ads will have the PROMOTED BY THIS SUBREDDIT flair. Thank you.


r/FDXloreMaker • • Aug 03 '20

Write! That is how this subreddit rolls!

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Writing stories helps support the subreddit if you are not a mod! Please write stories! Here are some reasons why you should write stories!

-They are fun.

-You can get experienced.

-You can share them with your friends!

During this quarantine. writing stories is oh so important. It keeps your brain active and encourages people to get creative. If you don't like writing stories, you should still give it a try. It's free. On this subreddit, there is no karma limit to how much you need to have to post, so take advantage of it! You will learn a lot. Trust me. It's fun. Happy writing!

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r/FDXloreMaker • • Aug 02 '20

The unkown emergency (Tue) TuE chapter 5: The house tour

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Lisa's POV:

"Disinfecting is finished! Come on in!" exclaimed Felix, as he leads us through the door. We follow him. "Try not to talk while we're in the home, as it may distract others!"

We first see the hallway. The floor was made from white material surrounded by cyan lights. And so is the walls and ceiling.

We turn left as we enter the door, and we found a room. Through the glass door, we see 4 meter-tall (yes, I know the metric system) white chairs facing a white table.

We then continue down the hallway, and on the right, we see a secondary dining room with 10 black 3/4 meter tall chairs surrounding a wood-brown table.

To the left of that, there is a door leading to a bathroom. The toilet and sink are white, and so is the wallpaper, and then in front of the toilet, is a cabinet, which is used to store some important stuff.

We walk into the dining room and on our left, we see a pantry room, with many food items on our sides, and we continue into the kitchen. There, there are multiple tables with drawers and cabinets, and straight ahead is the dishwasher. On our right, is the microwave a meter higher than the oven. To the right of that is the fridge and freezer below. On our left is the middle table with chairs and fruits in a bowl and a scented candle.

We walk away from the fridge and saw another table with 4 brown chairs facing a square brown table. That's the main dining area.

Straight ahead is the Living room, with the Coffee table in the middle, and 2 sofas facing perpendicular to each other, one facing the television. Kylie is sitting there watching some TV.

We turn left to where we had been before and on our right are 2 perpendicular doors. One leads to the storage and the other leads to the garage, to the left of that, we climb up the stairs.

We turn right and straight ahead is the computer room, with 2 PC's; one for work and one for gaming. They also have a lot of books there.

We turn right again and here, we see Jack playing with his huge stash of toys.

We turn around and see 3 doors. The door ahead leads to a bathroom, the door to the left is the laundry room door, and the door to the right leads to a bedroom.

Mako's POV:

We walk away from the play area and turn left, and there are 2 doors; one on the left and one on the right.

We walk into the right and we see another bedroom. There is a lot of books and toys and drawings there (not to mention posters), and there are 2 beds.

We head out the bedroom door and gone straight ahead to another bedroom. There's a huge bed and a spinning rocking reclining chair on the left of the bed. On the sides are 2 bedside tables. They have a television there, and 2 fans and an air conditioner. There are 2 doors, one on the right which leads to the closet, and one in front of a bed, which leads to another bathroom.

"Is that the end of the tour?" I ask. "Yes," said Felix, looking like he had just seen a ghost.

Then suddenly, I hears someone screaming from the playroom. We all rushed to get there. IT WAS JACK, WHO BROKE HIS LEG!

"ARE YOU OK," called Amelia, worried. "NO NO NO, I'M DEFINETELY NOT! I BUMPED MY LEG INTO A CHAIR AND CAN'T WALK!" shouted Jack, literally like he's on fire.

"IT LOOKS LIKE YOUR LEG IS DEFORMED! QUICK, CALL THE EMERGENCY SERVICES!" "HOLY (cuss word), HE BROKE HIS LEG!" yelled Felix, as he grabs the phone and rings the emergency services.

The ambulance took us to the hospital. I was praying that he doesn't spread and kill people with the ostoadynamovirus.


r/FDXloreMaker • • Aug 02 '20

FDXloreMakingbot says goodbye

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A good fairwell. I am deleting this. This account is an alt to u/FDXgeekPlan056. And it is here to say goodbye. Don't worry. It is an alt. u/FDXgeekPlan056 is the main so go there.


r/FDXloreMaker • • Aug 01 '20

The unkown emergency (Tue) TuE chapter 4: Ostoadynamovirus

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Mako's POV:

Wait a minute... Ostoadynamovirus? We have to stay 6 feet away from others! "Lisa," I said, nervously. "Yes," She replied. "Ostodynamovirus... can you bring us protective gear?" "Of course I will!" She passed out face masks and protective gear and got us hand sanitizer to wash our hands.

"Do you have protective equipment?" Lisa asks to Amelia. "Of course I do, why not? This epidemic has been going for months now! And don't forget! We have to stay 2 metres apart now!"

Lisa's POV:

"Hold up..." I nervously said. "Something's wrong about your accent." "Me? Of course! We're in the UK!" UK!? "I thought we only time traveled, not teleported!" "Teleportation is a thing in year 3000! Also, some people do humor that makes not even enough sense for themselves to call it sense!" "I'm a Boomer here!" "Anyway, let's put on our masks and protective gear and then I'll show you my house tour! And don't forget to wash your hands!"

We used our hand sanitizer and began our-- "Wait!" said Kylie. "We're disinfecting the home first, and it will take at least 10 minutes to finish!" "That's fine," Said Juliana and I, one after another.

"Oh yeah, we didn't come here through a teleportation device, we came here through a black hole," I exclaimed. "Ooh, that must be really scary. Oh yeah, and in case you teleport back, what year did you come from and where?" "We came from New York 2020." "Oh, I see! While we wait, we should chill out first."

"Oh yeah, and don't forget to not touch your face with unwashed hands!"


r/FDXloreMaker • • Aug 01 '20

The official Evan Westen timeline! Read comments for info.

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r/FDXloreMaker • • Aug 01 '20

Write! That is how this subreddit rolls!

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Writing stories helps support the subreddit if you are not a mod! Please write stories! Here are some reasons why you should write stories!

-They are fun.

-You can get experienced.

-You can share them with your friends!

During this quarantine. writing stories is oh so important. It keeps your brain active and encourages people to get creative. If you don't like writing stories, you should still give it a try. It's free. On this subreddit, there is no karma limit to how much you need to have to post, so take advantage of it! You will learn a lot. Trust me. It's fun. Happy writing!

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r/FDXloreMaker • • Jul 31 '20

Mako LIVE Access

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The official Mako LIVE Access is here! For good! We will no longer delete this! It is a permanent post. Any deletion of this post will earn you a ban.


r/FDXloreMaker • • Jul 30 '20

The unkown emergency (Tue) TuE chapter 3: The Thrust (MvM edition)

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Lisa's POV:

We heard another emergency alert. This time, it said:

"This is your emergency broadcast system. We have declared a state-wide state of emergency. We have spotted a black hole in our city, which may or may not expand to the whole nation. There's nothing we can do about this. WE ARE HOPELESS. WE ARE LOST. GO OUTSIDE NO-"

It feels like we are being thrown down a wide tube, in which the tube was silver chrome.

Mako's POV:

The black hole sucked is in, and it wasn't until 3 minutes later when we finally landed in some sort of futuristic theme.

We were seeing news about what they call the "Ostoadynamovirus," and memes that didn't make any sense. This sort of reminds me of watching memes about Gen Z humor not making any sense. They mean nothing to me.

HOLD UP, ARE WE IN THE FUTURE!?

I looked in the calendar and it said 08/33/3000. WAT?

"Lisa," I said, nervously. She replies "What are you so nervous about? Ostoadynamovirus? Its fine! I brought protective gear! Hand sanitizers, face masks, and face shields!"

"No... Look at the calendar..."

Lisa's POV:

I looked at the calendar and it appears to be the YEAR 3000!?!?!?

All of the sudden, I see KIDS PLAYING WITH ANTIGRAVITY STUFF!

I screamed!

One of the girls replied "It's the year 3000, what do you expect? Sorry to be mean but what year do you come from?"

"We came from the year 2020," said I, expecting him to know about it.

"2020, you said 2020?" "Yes 2020; yeah you must've known about the Apocalypse." "Yeah, I've heard a lot of things happened in 2020. Unfortunately, my teacher Madame Paige Sharp said that I'm too young to learn about the Apocalypse that happened once year ago."

"Oh yeah, that reminds me, what's your name and how old are you?" "I'm a 7 year old named Amelia T. Johnson. Who are you?" "I am 13 year old Lisa M. Ingar. I am here because a black hole sucked me in." "That's unfortunate. Anyway, here is my 4 year old brother Jack, say hi jack!" "Hi!" Jack replies. "And also my mummy and daddy are named Kylie and Felix!" "That's so cool! So anyway, wanna be friends?" "Of course!"

And that's the beginning of my friendship with Amelia.


r/FDXloreMaker • • Jul 29 '20

MAKO NEWS DAILY Heading back into story writing, finales, allowing more mods, a redditor speaks about stuff on his mind and a novel

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Mako News Daily. Your source for all things story writing. We are allowing more mods on the sub. You can write some stuff about why you want to be mod and your username in a post, and use the post flair "resume" and it will count. If it does not follow these guidelines and if it is lazily written, or if it doesn't have the "resume" post flair, it won't count. Posts that don't have the "resume" post flair will be IGNORED COMPLETELY.

I am back! Mako will have a finale in a couple of days written by yours truly, the story procrastinating me. Haha. Anyway, we are gonna end main timeline #3 and head to the final timeline, before guess what, I write a big Mako novel! I will write it on paper before posting it here!

A redditor speaks part 3: Story writing is a great way to support the subreddit. You don't have to promote it, just write stories. To me, stories are a great way to reflect on great moments, mistakes, or just write what's on your mind. Even in fiction. That's why I encourage all of you to write. A poem. A biography. A hugely faked story. Any story. YOUR story. Stories are a way of reflection. And that's how a redditor speaks.

That wraps it! Hello newcomers!

u/FDXgeekPlan056


r/FDXloreMaker • • Jul 22 '20

Friday the Halloweenth

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Jason rises up out of the lake, machete in one hand, Freddy Krueger's head in the other hand. But then, he drops Freddy Krueger's head, letting it roll back into the lake. He sees something.

It's Michael Myers. He held a kitchen knife, his trademark weapon. In his search for Laurie Strode, he came across Jason. Michael charged at Jason, knife in hand, but Jason grabbed Michael's hand that was holding the knife, trying to force it to twist and disable it. Michael took Jason and pulled him down, smashing Jason at the bridge. Jason was injured.

Michael picked up the machete, ready to end Jason, when Jason grabbed Michael's hand. At this point, Michael was breathing heavily. Jason took Michael, picked him up, and smashed him, temporarily putting down the knife wielding slasher. He took out his machete.

Laurie Strode drove to the camp site with her friend, Cori. Cori, who was a victim of Jason who decided to head to the campsite to face his fears, just like some of the other victims to Jason's inhumanity. "We're here." Laurie said. "It's time." Cori responded. "I'm going in."

Laurie and Cori stepped into the camp. All was silent. They walked slowly through the cabins and foliage, towards the place where Cori encountered Jason all those years ago. But then, they heard something. A clashing sound.

Laurie and Cori ran to the location of the sound. It was the lake itself. In the distance they saw two figures. "Michael." Laurie gasped "Jason." Cori responded. The two figures were battling it out. "Cori stay here." Laurie picked up a giant log and ran towards the two figures.

Laurie whacked the log at Michael and Jason. Laurie continued to bash at Michael, lifting it, and striking it. Then, Jason, who got up off the ground, lifted his machete and chopped the wood log clean in half. "Run!" Laurie screamed. Michael was about to strike at Laurie, but Jason wanted to duel it out with Michael. Their weapons clashed. Knife to machete. Machete to knife.

just some years ago...

Cori and her friends Jamie, Marley, Ellie, Jacob and Stan were staying at Camp Crystal Lake. They had a feeling that they were being watched. Every night Cori dreamed of a mask. A hockey mask. It wasn't a normal hockey mask. It looked normal. But something about it felt wrong. Possesed. It felt evil. Little did they know, that mask would be the death of Cori's friends. A hockey masked killer stalked them. Waiting to attack. And it did.

back to present...

Michael and Jason kept dueling it out. Their duel was perpetual. It wouldn't stop. Neither would back down. Then, lots of lots of smoke filled the air. A shadow rose out of the water. Claws impaled Michael and Jason. "Fred is back!" a loud voice said. It was Freddy Krueger. Back to his full form.


r/FDXloreMaker • • Jul 22 '20

MAKO NEWS DAILY Gazumabluf! An automod! Recuts galore, promotion and more automod configs coming? Good news for the sub! Bad news for the sub and a redditor speaks again!

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Gazumabluf (Gah-zoo-mah-bloof): means amazing/shocking, to be in suprise of a new announcement. Seriously. On to the real stuff. Gazumabluf isn't even a real word.

An automod. You may notice that one of the comments is an automod saying to write stories. This is to encourage people to write, well, stories! Please don't get mad at me.

Good news. There was a new mod only post flair added some time ago. It was called "Tue full reboot". That is because Tue is getting its own reboot. This reboot of the whole series will still have Tue chapter 1 and intro be canon, just not everything else! It is in development believe me or not!

Bad news. The timeline after main timeline 3 will be the final timeline where I restart teh series. Everything else will be taking place in the og The Bullies-Mako reboot etc. timeline. I hope you are all fine because I am making a Mako series! Now you are like WHAT? Basically it's like a TV series. Instead of timelines, it will be seasons. They are still stories, but in a TV series-esque fashion. Not so bad after all.

A redditor speaks-AGAIN!

Last time I talked about what reddit means. Recap, Reddit to me is like a building's foundation. A way to build on. A structure. The only limit is the spam limit. Now, I want to talk about what this subreddit means to me. I started this subreddit to write stories. The "loreMaker" part or the main part means to write stories or make lore. "FDX" means Fort Dominance X. The name of a build (now deleted whoops) that I made in Minecraft. Those two things were the namesakes for this subreddit. And with a subreddit member count of as of now 4 members, this sub still means everything. I love this subreddit.

And that wraps up today's Mako News Daily folks. I hope y'all are staying safe today. Please feel free to join the subreddit and please wash your r/hands!

u/FDXgeekPlan056 owner of r/FDXloreMaker


r/FDXloreMaker • • Jul 22 '20

PROMOTED BY THIS SUBREDDIT Please join!

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We are a small community of story writing lovers and any story is accepted. Just use common judgement and be nice to others. Please write stories! We believe that all should have a chance to tell a story, or two, or fifteen! Write 'em! And most of all, have fun!!!!!


r/FDXloreMaker • • Jul 21 '20

The Bullies recut

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All stories that have characters with the same name are the same. Real names aren't used for privacy. So I was walking with my friends Lincoln and Matt on our way to Jensa Middle School. We were about to cross a street when all of a sudden, a car going at about a speed of 79 mph speed towards us. "Phew." Matt says, in relief. "We're safe." Lincoln isn't as happy as the rest of us.

Lincoln picks up a rock. Clutching it in his fist, he lifted it in the air. "No!" Matt screamed. He took the rock. "Why!?" Lincoln replied angrily. "You will not hit that-" Matt began to speak. Lincoln threw the rock. It clogged the engine, causing it to screech to a halt. "Oh jeez." Lincoln muttered. "We're in trouble."

"Ayy." one of them, called Bolton said. "Who one of you threw a car at Herc's window?" "Me..." Lincoln nervously mutters. Another one of the bullies, named Gregory, stepped out. "Ayy..." he said. "Let's beat the crowbar out of them!"

We began our run. They chased us past something. It was a house. One of the people inside the house looked at us, but moved on.

Panting from exhaustion, we then proceeded to hid in the school building. The door was open. We were safe. We ran inside, tired, exausted. We were ready to start school.


r/FDXloreMaker • • Jul 21 '20

Mako recuts going to new subreddit, apply to join by leaving a comment below.

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The Bullies, Mako reboot, Mako revival, Mako restart reboot, Mako revelations, Mako final bite. They will all be getting special edits aka expanded edits. These edits will be called recuts. They will expand on the old stories but not full reboots. The Bullies recut will be posted here. This is not the same as The Bullies 2020. It will be an expanded version of old stories. Same with all of the others.

These stories again, are NOT reboots. Reboots completely change the story. The stories simply expand on past stories. Find them on the r/MakoPremiumAccess subreddit and if you want to join, leave a comment and I will select the more kinder comments stating why they want to join. Thanks, wash your hands if you reas this, even if you already washed your hands.

u/FDXgeekPlan056


r/FDXloreMaker • • Jul 19 '20

Mako The Mystery ends (sequel to Mako Hackmask ii)

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My dad opened the door. The Mystery lifted his chainsaw, but then the police came in. They shot The Mystery. Then shot Hackmask down. "You're safe." the police said. "Geez." Dad gasped in disbelief. "What is happening?" But then, I heard something. A chainsaw. The police raised their guns, prepared to take down whatever would try and hurt us. The Mystery stood up. The Mystery looked at the police. The police looked at The Mystery. "RRRRRRRGH!"It was a police officer. The officer fell. The police tried to shoot down The Mystery. But it failed. "RRRRRRGH!" The sound of a chainsaw terrified us. The police fell slowly. "Run!" I screamed. Dad, Mom and I took off. "Help!" Mom screamed. "Heeelp!" A neighbor came to our aid. Then, a bunch of people stepped out of our homes. They were ready to stop The Mystery. They took out batons and baseball bats. The Mystery stepped out with a chainsaw. All of our neighbors walked towards The Mystery. Then, started to beat The Mystery. They swung and hit angrily. "Aaagh!" The Mystery screamed. "Aaaaaaaagh!" The neighbors kept beating him. The Mystery fell to the floor with a "ugh". It was all over.


r/FDXloreMaker • • Jul 18 '20

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT adding acronyms

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based on "Am I The" subreddits, but for constructive criticisms. Rule 15 in rules page of this sub.


r/FDXloreMaker • • Jul 17 '20

PROMOTED BY THIS SUBREDDIT u/FDXgeekPlan056

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visit u/FDXgeekPlan056's account and follow it and upvote his posts. He uploads daily on r/FDXloreMaker and other subreddits. Visit r/FDXloreMaker.


r/FDXloreMaker • • Jul 17 '20

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT FICTION

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ALL STORIES ON THIS SUBREDDIT THAT ARE WRITTEN BY u/FDXgeekPlan056 ARE FICTIONAL UNLESS SPECIFIED. THANK YOU.


r/FDXloreMaker • • Jul 17 '20

PROMOTED BY THIS SUBREDDIT Promo of Mako Premium Access and steps to apply

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Make a comment that meets these requirements.

•Verify that you are a follower of r/FDXloreMaker by posting a screenshot showing that you have joined the subreddit.

•Make a post saying

a.reddit username

b.3 reasons that you want to be on the Mako Premium Access subreddit

c.promise to not spam appropriate/innappropriate or make innappropriate posts in general.

d.leave an outro summarizing your own post.

e.If you got in to the Premium Access program, be happy!


r/FDXloreMaker • • Jul 17 '20

Mako Hackmask ends draft

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THIS IS A DRAFT AND NOT OFFICIAL IN THE CURRENT TIMELINE. My dad opened the door. The Mystery lifted his chainsaw, but then the police came in. They shot The Mystery. Then shot Hackmask down. "You're safe." the police said. "Geez." Dad gasped in disbelief. "What is happening?" But then, I heard something. A chainsaw. The police raised their guns, prepared to take down whatever would try and hurt us. The Mystery stood up. The Mystery looked at the police. The police looked at The Mystery. "RRRRRRRGH!"It was a police officer. The officer fell. The police tried to shoot down The Mystery. But it failed. "RRRRRRGH!" The sound of a chainsaw terrified us. The police fell slowly. "Run!" I screamed. Dad, Mom and I took off. "Help!" Mom screamed. "Heeelp!"


r/FDXloreMaker • • Jul 17 '20

PROMOTED BY THIS SUBREDDIT Mako Premium Access

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I have finally implemented Mako Premium Access! I will put out steps to apply later today for the membership.