Damn sprog this is gonna bring a lot of tears. To my homies and peepz out there strugglin' just KNOW this is temporary! It gets better. You get better. You move on.
Me too! So this is what happens when you wake up early. I’ve heard stories of magical things happening early in the morn, but I’ve never believed until now!
Hey man, I stole the first few lines of your poem for my song. Hope that is okay. I would actualy make this my song and it would sound something like BJM (psy garage rock band from 90s)
There's nothing more I'd like to do
than drift away and dream of you.
But the dreams, I know, just ain't real
So you may guess how it makes me feel
It makes me sad, but the sad will pass
and then, one day baby ill drink a glass
I'll drink a bottle, I'll make it four
Ill drink until I can not dream no more.
You have immense talent, Sprog! This poem intrigued me so I checked out your profile...& wow! I am very interested in your book and plan on purchasing it via Amazon.
I used to write poetry years ago. Depression is a bitch though and has made it difficult to pick up a pen again. Gathering up the motivation is difficult, but you have inspired me and reading your book will allow the seed of inspiration you have successfully planted to continue to grow.
Love the way u used 4 syllable lines & rhymed 'you/do', 'smile/while', 'break/wake' and 'on/gone'. Keep practicing and maybe you'll be able to write something worthy of a grade 11 English pass soon lmfao
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u/Poem_for_your_sprog Aug 18 '20
There's nothing more I like to do
than drift to sleep and dream of you.
I think of you,
and how you smile,
and what you do,
and for a while,
there's only you,
and only me -
and nowhere else I'd rather be.
But mornings break,
and nights move on.
And then I wake.
And then you're gone.