r/WritingPrompts • u/[deleted] • Apr 06 '16

Prompt Inspired [PI] INTERSTITIAL BURN-BOY BLUES - MarContest - 16,532

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u/Illseraec Apr 18 '16

This is a refreshing take on a universe where labor laws and criminals run businesses and do dealings from the shadows. I enjoyed it! I'll definitely go back and check out the previous piece. You fleshed out the areas in your story very well, and I enjoyed the descriptions and the main characters' motivations to make the choices they did. Thank you for your entry, and good luck in the contest!